Do you go about your ad creation blindly? Honestly, I used to just make groups of ads, disregarding a control variable and causing myself to not only lose money, but leave plenty of money on the table as well.
I have recently spent A LOT of time and money investigating different variables that may influence ad click-through-rate, specifically using Facebook Ads. What I found has helped turn losing campaigns into winners, and has made me more money as a result.
I compared ad title length to click-through-rate using Facebook Ads.
Facebook Ad Title Length in Comparison to Click-Through-Rate
Since you are limited to a 25 character title, I compared 1 line vs. 2 line titles.
The title does change and may include more information as a result of increasing the length, but on certain campaigns that isn’t always the case. Regardless, I feel like this was a successful study.
The Overall Numbers
For the purposes of this case study, each campaign was a different niche, different demographic, and different offer.
Campaigns: 4
Ads: 8
1 Line Ads: 4
2 Line Ads: 4
Average 1 Line Ad CTR: .162
Average 2 Line Ad CTR: .206
Total Impressions: 40,000,000
I will break it down even further, to a campaign level, and explain why I believe I had the results I did.
Campaign 1
Campaign 1 contained 2 ads – One ad with a 1 line title, and one ad with a 2 line title.
1 Line Title
Impressions: 1.4M
CTR: .31%
2 Line Title
Impressions: 1.3M
CTR: .35%
This specific campaign was a younger demographic, and relatively targeted. While the 2 line title did not blow the 1 line title ad out of the water, .04% of 1.3M impressions is an extra 500+ clicks, at the same cost (bidding CPM).
The other reason why the 2 line title might have performed better, is because I engaged the users a little more with the 2 line title.
Campaign 2
Campaign 2 contained 2 ads – One ad with a 1 line title, and one ad with a 2 line title.
1 Line Title
Impressions: 3.2M
CTR: .17%
2 Line Title
Impressions: 1.5M
CTR: .14%
This campaign was widely targeted (all ages) but used keywords as well. This was the only campaign in this case study where the 1 line ad outperformed the 2 line ad.
I think this happened because the 2 line ad was engaging, yes, but not as eye catching as the 1 line ad. I used special characters in the 1 line ad which probably caused the higher CTR.
Campaign 3
Campaign 3 contained 2 ads – One ad with a 1 line title, and one ad with a 2 line title.
1 Line Title
Impressions: 7.5M
CTR: .16%
2 Line Title
Impressions: 6.0M
CTR: .21%
This was another keyword targeted campaign, but it was to a younger audience (under 35).
Similar to the first campaign, I was engaging the viewers with the 2 line title instead of simply telling them what they were about to click on. In the end, it definitely paid off
Campaign 4
Campaign 4 contained 2 ads – One ad with a 1 line title, and one ad with a 2 line title.
1 Line Title
Impressions: 12.3M
CTR: .17%
2 Line Title
Impressions: 6.7M
CTR: .33%
This campaign produced the strongest results. Notice the lesser impressions on the 2 line ad, but the CTR on both ads was pretty steady throughout. This campaign was an older demographic, with no keyword targeting.
The most interesting point about this campaign was that both the 1 line and 2 line ads were engaging to the users. This was the main campaign that brought up the idea of comparing ad title length related to CTR, and I believe this case study was a success.
To take it a step further, I also noticed higher CTR and conversions (more money in your pocket) using the following tactics on Facebook Ads.
Extremely Short Ad Titles
Using very short titles like this will do the following:
- Make the picture stand out more
- Make you more money if you do have it targeted well
- Will induce more curiosity clicks
- Force more creativity in the ad body
- Lose you money if you do not have it targeted well
One of the largest volume, and most profitable ads I ran on Facebook used this tactic. If you have any experience with Facebook Ads though, you realize that it might take 5, 10, or 500 submissions of the exact same ad to make it profitable. Be persistent, but be smart. Give it a try!
Another great tactic I have used (to some success) is what I call the ‘stacked’ title.
Stacked Ad Titles
This tactic does the following:
- Gives your ad more total ‘real estate’
- Can drastically increase CTR
- Allow for a short ad body
- Creates a visual trail for viewers
- Takes practice to be effective
As was the nature of this case study, I definitely believe in 2 line ad titles and think they can be very effective when trying to increase click-through-rates. Another thing I noticed using this tactic, is that you can engage your users an incredible amount up front if you include enough information about the offer and/or the solution to their problem. If you simply slap a few long words together and think you will make profit though, you will be very long. Finding the right combination using this tactic does take time, but in the long run, will make you more money.
Concluding Remarks
If you have been doing Internet marketing for any amount of time, you have heard this more times than you can count, but that also means you appreciate the importance of the following statement:
Test EVERYTHING
Related posts:
- Light vs. Dark – Building Profitable Facebook and MySpace Ads
- Facebook Ads Dating Case Study: Does The Picture “Type” Affect CTR?




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This is one hell of write up on Facebook CTR. I’ve had lots of hits and misses bidding CPM so this should definitely help me out. Thanks for the info!
No problem Clarke. It’s definitely difficult to crack and takes TONS of testing, but it almost always pays off if you are persistent! Thanks for stopping by!
Great post Jeremy! All I have to say is keep up the good work. This is one of the best and most informative internet marketing blogs i’ve read in ages. Hope you don’t stop because i’m adding this blog to my favorites.
Thanks Shane! I don’t plan to stop, I hope to be able to continue helping you and others with great information about my experiences.
That is amazing, thanks for sharing. I have no experience in FB advertising, but this info makes you have a new way of looking at this.
No problem Omar. Glad I could help!
Hi Jeremy,
What an awesome article! Just found your blog thru a comment you have left somewhere, just consuming it
Keep it up!
Thanks Feri! I’m glad people are finding me and enjoying my writing!
just as i’m having this problem i google search and land into your blog. neat post bro.
Darrenovic
Thanks man! It’s just a starting point, but it has helped me. Glad you enjoyed it.
Great post, do you submit all your ads CPC at first?
Why do you submit the same ad over and over? Do you get served better traffic on some ads and not others?
Depends. If the CPC is low enough, I do sometimes, otherwise I simply test everything with CPM to start. Sometimes a complete duplicate ad will perform entirely different than the original, so sometimes that strategy does not work. However, sometimes it will just drive extra traffic to you and increase profitability and overall revenue. In that case, it’s well worth it.
I’m getting suggested bids between .96-1.15, is there any way to get clicks for much lower than that on a CPC basis, I can make 1000 ads and wait for the clicks to trickle in but I never seem to get volume that way.
I see you talking about 3000 ads, how do you compile 3000 different images fast? Have you submitted the same exact ad to the same exact demo 100 times and seen substantial differences in CTR? Btw thanks for answering these questions, your blog is probably the most informative one I’ve read so far.
Over the past few weeks, Facebook has changed A LOT. Certain demographics are extremely expensive now, regardless of your method (CPC/CPM).
I didn’t have 3000 different images. I would use 1 ad title/body and 10 images. Then I could use those same images and test 5 more ad title/body combinations, etc.
Yes I have seen substantial CTR differences on the EXACT same ad. I really could not tell you why that is because I have seen this regardless of demographic size.
Not a problem answering your questions, I’m glad I can help. I might include your questions on a next post!
15th
You get ANOTHER cookie!
Wow …some people really test things that I’ve never think of testing. Good lesson.
Awesome Mihai, I’m glad you appreciate it.
How long did you run the ads for?
It depends, Kim. I’ve had ads that were profitable for 3-4 months consistently, but some are hit/miss. If the ad is profitable for you, keep running it!
Thanks for the sharing. This will definitely help in our advertising in Facebook.
Not a problem Jasmine.
Great info, man I wish I saw this a couple weeks (and a couple hundred bucks) ago! The ‘Test EVERYTHING’ closing remark is dead on. Thanks for sharing all this info, its awesome!
Not a problem Rick, too bad you didn’t find it sooner.
Good luck!
Thank a lot. Very informative
No problem Tony, glad it helps!
Hi Jeremy, would you recommend landing pages or direct linking for dating offers? Richmen.com?
Test, test, test.
Additional questions may be answered in a future PAQA post, but I cannot make any guarantees.
Good luck!